The Girl Who Cries Broken

by stillmomsgirl   Oct 30, 2007


No one is around when she falls apart
She just falls silently until, finally,
when she hits the ground
she doesnt know how to get back up

So she waits for someone to find her
and put the pieces back together
When someone eventually comes,
her sharp edges push them away
They figure picking her up isnt worth the pain

She hates herself for pushing people away
when she knows she needs help
since she cant get up on her own

She used to be beautiful before she fell
Now she looks in the mirror
and cant even see the original picture

She tries to tell people how she fell,
but they wont listen
No one knows why shes broken

No one knows that sometimes
she gets so used to being broken,
she cant even imagine what it feels like to be whole

She pushes good things away
so people figure she doesnt want help

When she cries again, no one comes
because its a known fact
that you should never answer
to the cry of a wolf

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  • 16 years ago

    by DiNa

    That poem is really good...
    your talented :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Wow, I loved this piece as well. You have a really strong talent. Very well written, definitely one of my favorite writers.

  • 16 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Woww..
    I really like this piece...
    its really good...
    I can relate to this...
    Anyways..
    Great Job.. =]]

  • 17 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    Ohkay so i have some suggestions. put it into stanzas so its a little easier to read. with it all bunched together its harder to figure out completely what your meaning because its just like a paragraph if it was stanzas it'd be easier...but i really like this!

    (P.S. don't get P.O'd at me for suggestions please...its suggestions not death threats kay people? thanks)

  • 17 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Please Comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!