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Ohkay so i have some suggestions. put it into stanzas so its a little easier to read. with it all bunched together its harder to figure out completely what your meaning because its just like a paragraph if it was stanzas it'd be easier...but i really like this!

(P.S. don't get P.O'd at me for suggestions please...its suggestions not death threats kay people? thanks)

Woww..
I really like this piece...
its really good...
I can relate to this...
Anyways..
Great Job.. =]]

Wow, I loved this piece as well. You have a really strong talent. Very well written, definitely one of my favorite writers.

That poem is really good...
your talented :)