Demon of the night.

by xoxkatrinaxox   Oct 31, 2007


Tossing and turning in the night. tears running down

her face. the world is a demon, fire flashing beneath her eyes. kicking and screaming thats all she can do.

she is being pulled away from her life, her scream fades and nobody can hear the faint sound of her crying ou to the world.

Waking up she falls down..maybe it was a dream but maybe it was her life.
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** i wrote this during second hour when i was rly bored. my friend said it was good so i decided to post it and see what everybody thinks. so plz tell me what u think and what i need to improve on.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    So wonderfullllllll...I love it keep it up5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    WOW
    this is like one of the best poems i have read. it's great. i love it

    well done
    5/5 defo. no question

  • 16 years ago

    by Helen

    I love the use of words it really build a picture in a way :D if i could describe it it would be "BOOM!!" :D just because its like i dont know o.O lol im being very random with this comment...

    =] 5/5 =]