Comments : Trigger in my eyes

  • 17 years ago

    by Loveless

    I feel really bad but i think this is one of ur best poems...

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Simply great. I love this one!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was very well written, i loved
    the way it all came together. the flow
    was ok, and the repetition was great.
    nice work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Once again reminding me of a song and almost exactly like it, the flow was good and it was easy to read with the song lyrics from Linkin Park in there. 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Woww
    nice emotion
    this poem is very
    well written
    the flow was
    amazing
    you outdid
    yourself
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Sirrah

    Woah this is a great poem...sweet job 5/5