Wow, ending adds so much effect to the atmosphere that you created. This poem is really beautiful and very emotional, you expressed your self on fantastic, and very unique, way, and mixed that with excellent imagery. This piece is simply impressing. Well done!

This was a great read. Honestly I loved the ending I found it to be deep and held alot of meaning and emotions. A beautiful poem you have here which had great description. The imagery was beautiful I loved the painted picture which you created into my mind. Overall a great read. Keep up the good work ~Mel