by Joshua Grider Oct 31, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Shining forth like a shooting star. |
Loved it but sad =( |
by Lisa
That was so beautiful |
Beautiful...that's really sweet. You're so talented. Amazing how you sum up your feelings in such small and simple words. |
Awww...i wonder who you are writing about there...i would love it if a guy wrote a poem like that to me! yet another great piece of work from you...keep up the great work!! 5/5 |
Hmmm....interestingly random. I like the beginning, I start out poems with popular rhymes when I can't think of anything to write....lol good job though....I dk.. |