Nitin
Everytime we write together you make me feel so good. I loved that you took time from your busy work load to write with me. Thank you for everything. You are indeed a very special man.
Love Cindy

Hi Nitin,

I loved this beautiful poem you and Cindy made together.
Keep up the good work,

kindest regards,

5/5 Ingrid

I loved the sadness in this. Painful yet somehow hopeful. I've missed the collabs with you and Cindy. This should be in the top rated soon! Heh. =]] Take care and hope you're doing well.

Always,
Liz =]

Gosh...last stanza absolutely Rocked :'(
beautiful Write Nitin, Missed your poems a lot
I hope everythings goin Okay with you =]
keep writing
NemO xx

Nitin.....great job on the collab....like I told Cindy....hard to tell where one writer ends and the other begins....you two have really mastered the collab form....

The last two verses for me were outstanding....especially like the line:

"Leaving me like living clay"

Keep 'em coming!....and hey....would love to see another Nitin solo too!....take care, Debbie

I love this poem..... my favorite lines are....

Searching this Earth dreaming of you
Never quite being able to reach your side
Screaming your name, only silence returned
Scared and lonely since our love died

it was so powerful... keep up the good work 5/5

xoxox
Jess

Well done!
This is simply beautiful. I love it =]
5/5 work

Great poem. would love if you can vote and comment my new poems

This is a great poem. i really enjoyed reading it. it explains what i felt wen i lost the one i love. keep writing!

Nitin, so happy to see you writing again.Its been long time and this is best way to return , writing with best writing partner.You and cindy always weave magic together through words.

A fantastic write.The poem is so well displaying love and lost emotions. Really heartfelt write.

Hope to see you two writing soon again.

Take care
chavii.

Very good.

compliments to you!

Excellent. You've managed to write a poem thats both dark and beautiful at the same time!! A definite 5/5!

Great job with this piece 5/5 GG23

Loved it. (-_-)

Nice job on this collab, I especially like the last stanza.

What a beautiful and heartbreaking poem... i especially love the last line. xx

Another beautiful deeply heartfelt poem girls, you two work so well together, I can't wait for the next piece, xox sam