Hey Cindy, this is just what i needed. Its been so long since we wrote together and only i know how it feels to be hete on this site with you.
Its a great feeling and i am simply out of words....could never thank u enough.

beautiful write indeed.

all the best and take care

Never knew, life was a game
the harder I learned to play
tougher the rules became
leaving me like living clay

This is my favorite stanza, I feel like this too.
Another beautiful poem by you, Cindy dear...
My compliments to End of Eternity too.

love,
Ingrid

I love your collabs cindy, they are so good, theres a typo in line 3, i absolutely love the the second stanza, i had to keep reading it, lol, the flow and grammer tis good, its a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Brilliant write!! Loved it !

You and Nitin are the best collab writers here, by A LOT. This poem was simply amazing. I've missed youuu and your poetry. lol. take care!!

Love,
Liz =]

I can understand and in someways relate to this. 5/5

I loved you're poem so much its really deep

Wow Cindy....you guys have become so good at the collab thing....I can no longer tell who has written which verse.....very well done!

I especially like the last two verses....this line in particular:

"Leaving me like living clay "

Keep 'em coming.....great work!

Cindy,
Not sure how you guys manage to just feed off each others minds like this. It's quite eerie not knowing which of you wrote what.
This was an amazing job as always between you two. They say great minds think alike and this is proof when it seems to have been written by one. Fantastic piece.
Love, Kay

Brilliant, breathtaking and heartbreaking.. Grats on a job well done guys.

Cindy, so good to see you and nitin writing again together.
You two are best collab writers on this site.And proof is this fantastic write.

A heartfelt poem of lost love, really touches readers heart.
Hope to see more such writes .

Take care
chavii.

Loved it. (-_-)

Nice job on the collab, very thought provoking. You guys work together well!

Another beautiful piece guys, you work so well together, keep it up, xox sam