Wow, love it. brought tears to my eyes. love the part about story in between becomes irrelevant. I can so relate 5/5

Man, Tammie. :/ I didnt like the rhyme scheme.

But I did like the first two lines, the moral, and the vocabulary. You did an ACE job on all of that. But next time.. Try I wouldnt suggest rhyming the last two lines and not the first. It throws everything off.

Much love, Suitcase.

Wow very well written and i totally agree that i should comment first and then ask them to comment mine, i have been commenting after i send that message, honest, thank you for pointing it out,

loved your poem i will read some more now

I really enjoyed reading this piece, I thought the word choice, imagery and flow were all excellent throught. It's funny how in a relationship people who we thought we knew usually turnout to be a stranger in the end. Sometimes it's just not worth getting a broken heart over, but it's easier said then done. Great job 5/5 GG23

Not to critique those that came before me, but dont you, the writer, find it annoying when a commenter repeats lines over and overwhen a commenter repeats lines over and overwhen a commenter repeats lines over and overwhen a commenter repeats lines over and overwhen a commenter repeats lines over and overwhen a commenter repeats lines over and over just to add to the text of their comment in the hope that you'll return the favor? i find it incredibly tastelss, and would encourage yuo to take on my mindset...wow, i sound so preachy. now, as for the poem, i thouroughly enjoyed it. it left me with a little glowing feeling that just wont quit! thanks!