This is a really fexcellent poem. You put great metaphors in there and the whole thing is just.....fawsome! I love it. ^_^ Keep writing!!!

That was so adorable, I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to read this. I got your message, and I had to come and check it out. =) I never forget a promise. stay sweet.

-elizabeth-

This reminds me of my BFF, Sara and one of my poems. You brought back good memories to me.