Definately pretty hard hitting, the topic of death is always a pretty emotional one for anybody who has lost people close to them. But I liked this one I thought it was different and unique in a good way. Try and capitalize the first letter of a new word on each new line - and always capitalize your I's. Great work 5/5 GG23

Hey! Good Poem! I really like the last stanza especially!
Well Done! xx

This is an awesome poem. its definitely one of your best. your on my fave authors list. just keep on writin and ill keep on readin!!