Fran you are on a roll! Your poems have some nice twists and turns, excellent.

Wow, This is pretty unique and I loved the ending. I can't wait to read more of your poems. Thus far I have enjoyed them greatly.

Awww..this is so sad...and yet..men do it all the time and think the other does not notice what is going on.

Because of the wording, which is kept very civil, the pain is somehow felt so much deeper..a really touching write, Fran.

God bless and a happy xmas time:)

5/5 Ingrid

Aww.. such a sweet poem! I think most kids have imaginary friends... it's really cute. Great job :)