by Pete Oct 31, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Severed your ties as you head for the hills. |
by Lor
Wow. Well that certainly hit home. Extremely powerful. I often wander if my dad ever thinks about what he is missing out on. Sometimes, I just want to forget. But I think its virtually impossible for a child to write a parent off. No matter how much it hurts, I keep clinging on. But back to the poem. Absolutely amazing. |
by Lisa
Wow really powerful write |
by gack60
I loved the rhyming structure of this poem where the last word rhymes with the first word and the old faithful a,b,c,b hidden in there too. |