I loved the rhyming structure of this poem where the last word rhymes with the first word and the old faithful a,b,c,b hidden in there too.

A well thought out piece with excellent use of vocabulary.

Well done mate

5/5

Gary.

Wow really powerful write
i loved it
keep it up!

Wow. Well that certainly hit home. Extremely powerful. I often wander if my dad ever thinks about what he is missing out on. Sometimes, I just want to forget. But I think its virtually impossible for a child to write a parent off. No matter how much it hurts, I keep clinging on. But back to the poem. Absolutely amazing.