Oh My! Thats Gorgeous. Simply breathtaking kat. The imagery was so vivid. The message so true...
Your very talented hun....
I absolutly love you peices...
Keep it up,
--Elly.

Yeah, kinda wanted it to be 'Shock Horror'
but i'll take the foreshadowing into account...
xxx

Okay , okay , okay! IWhy did I not see that coming? I thought it might be racey. You know unicorns horn etc.
I love the way it shocked me and the way you have beautifully enticed the reader into a false sence of security. 5/5

Michael
p.s I hope your inspiration returns soon. x