by Poet on the Piano Oct 31, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Your hands, |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. Nicely worded and reads smoothly. |
by Teria
Wow. I think what made me like this one most of all was that it didn't really rhyme, nor have a set syllable count - any of that. It just kind of went, and it's good! I do like free verse, a lot. But, sometimes it's hard to find good ones. Even, though all poems are good (to an extent of course), there's not many that I believe are worthy of praise. But, this one surely is darling. |
This is a good poem, but normally a twelve year old girl would not know what real love is. I think you're a bit ahead of your time. |