This is a good poem, but normally a twelve year old girl would not know what real love is. I think you're a bit ahead of your time.

<3 bella

Wow. I think what made me like this one most of all was that it didn't really rhyme, nor have a set syllable count - any of that. It just kind of went, and it's good! I do like free verse, a lot. But, sometimes it's hard to find good ones. Even, though all poems are good (to an extent of course), there's not many that I believe are worthy of praise. But, this one surely is darling.

You did a wonderful job with it, and I absolutely loved it.

And, the ending was great, as well. (:

Very good poem. Nicely worded and reads smoothly.

5/5