Tearing aprt

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 31, 2007


So many tears
I'm surprised I didn't
drown
So many years
when all I felt was down
You say I'm dramatic
Well maybe I am
You never get it
Because you never understand
god, it feels forever
since i could smile again
it feels like eternity
I've never known who I am
I broke into pieces
You tried to pick me up
It never helped
I'm still messed up
All i can do is cut and burn
scorching and slicing
into my skin
only to ease
the death craving within
I fell into bits
once i heard those lies
once i felt the burn
of a broken heart
you try to help
but seriously
i still get torn
apart

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracey777taintedslitta

    This is an incredible piece u have written, i can identify so closely with experience and feeling, im sure u cud probably identify wit some of my work! :)...ur very talented...amazing stuff! keep it up...

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Hey great poem its worded perfectly and also its as if it was strait from the heart im not sure wether this poem is from experience or not but i seems because of the emotion placed in the poem that it is so great work and be strong :) 5/5

    --emz--