Hey great poem its worded perfectly and also its as if it was strait from the heart im not sure wether this poem is from experience or not but i seems because of the emotion placed in the poem that it is so great work and be strong :) 5/5

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This is an incredible piece u have written, i can identify so closely with experience and feeling, im sure u cud probably identify wit some of my work! :)...ur very talented...amazing stuff! keep it up...