Can't you see

by xxSuicidalxx   Nov 1, 2007


Can you see behind this smile
Can you tell if its real
Can you try to look beyond it
and tell how I feel?

Can you see the ache
Deep inside my heart
can you see that its broken
cut and broken apart?

Can you see me bleeding
up and down my arm
Can you see
I can't stop causing myself harm?

Can't you see I need you to understand
Can't you see I am dying again
Can't you see I'm wanting to die
as planned?

Can't you be there for me
Can't you be my eyes to see clearly
Can't you help me be all right
really?

I'm sitting here
lost and empty
hoping someone
can rescue me

before i attempt
this suicide

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  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Wow.
    It was veryy good.I am really impressed.I hope i could write such thing.You are really Creative,it seems you have very strong emotions.Really i dont have words to praise what i have read and juddged you from your writing.It is really verry good.
    I am submitting my poems in this forrum and i need people like you to read them,give me suggestions and corrections,so that i can also improve my abilities.It will be very nice of you,if you please take out some time and read my few submitted poems.I would love to hear some possitive criticism from your side.
    Love
    Junaid

  • 16 years ago

    by falln angel with broken wings

    I love ur poems there great

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracey777taintedslitta

    This is beautiful... and its scary how most of what we write in poems is a reflection of whats going on... and thats what scares everyone... needless to say, we feel how we feel right? we write with similarities, u should check some out, may help understand my point of view...

    keep it up, u are talented...

  • 17 years ago

    by xXMohawkedMahemXx

    Wow... this is amazing..
    5/5... my fav stanza is.. (and i dont know why?)

    Can't you see I need you to understand
    Can't you see I am dying again
    Can't you see I'm wanting to die
    as planned?

    Something about this one.. =]
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    Amazing. absolutely amazing. 5/5. I hope this isn't a reflection of what's really true...

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