Comments : Did he notice her????

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    Clever. Really clever. I can somewhat relate.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Tht's really strong to have feeling wit someone who's an ass to you
    keep on writing nd mayb one day show him nd he might actually like the work

  • 15 years ago

    by junet

    I have the same situation like yours, but i never thought of doing a poem like this. everything you wrote here happened to me too.. gosh... yeah i like it :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, I've had this before, falling for a loser I mean but there's nothing we can do. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Siham

    Wow your words definitely hit hard.
    beautifully written 5/5