I Hope You Cry Too

by x Mo x   Nov 1, 2007


I knew it was
Too good to be true.
I did what I knew
I should never do.

I fell so weak
And I let it show.
I let it out, let it go.
Then I let the world know.

Even the blind could see
That I wasn't thinking.
My world was shrinking,
Eyes dry from not blinking.

Now you are gone
And you left but a hole.
You took me whole,
And I paid the toll.

I knew my life
Was too good to be true.
Why me? Why you?
I hope you cry too.

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  • 16 years ago

    by bleedingximperfection

    Wow, this was really good.
    I lovee it. (x
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Well done great poem here love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    The whole entire poem was wonderful, I like the ending... all your poems end nicely.

  • 16 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    Hmm i like it but i have a question shouldn't it be either "feel or felt" in this line: "I fell so weak" i dunno maybe you wrote it like that but yeah other than that i really like it good job.

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