by x Mo x Nov 1, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I knew it was |
Wow, this was really good. |
Well done great poem here love it |
by Dark Secrets
The whole entire poem was wonderful, I like the ending... all your poems end nicely. |
Hmm i like it but i have a question shouldn't it be either "feel or felt" in this line: "I fell so weak" i dunno maybe you wrote it like that but yeah other than that i really like it good job. |