Hmm i like it but i have a question shouldn't it be either "feel or felt" in this line: "I fell so weak" i dunno maybe you wrote it like that but yeah other than that i really like it good job.

The whole entire poem was wonderful, I like the ending... all your poems end nicely.

Well done great poem here love it

Wow, this was really good.
I lovee it. (x
5/5