by equisitelygrotesque Nov 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
The severed heartstrings, |
Thank yall ! |
I really enjoyed the poem I thought it flowed well and overall it was an excellent read I gave it a 5/5 - a couple things to improve your poem though if you care - 1. Littlest isn't a word but you can use smallest and 2. Always capatalize the letter I no matter what. Excellent job GG23 |
Really nice :) 5/5 |