First off, I'll wish you good luck for the contest - I'm sure you won't need it.

Nice short, sharp lines in this, really puts the emphasis on the repeated line. Love the way that evolves into the "Now you're no longer my girl!"

Lost love is a s.o.b, and I think you got the emotions through nicely in this piece.

Keep it up.
~Pete.

I really like this poem, flows very well and good ending,

Wow, very powerful poem. I especially loved the ending. Great job 5/5

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