Love left you with this reply

by Fan Angeleo   Nov 1, 2007


I am here waiting
in the coldness of
the night.
Chilly spine tingling goose bumps/flesh
like snow on a mountain just waiting
for one moment that appears.

The days are being numbered my
soul my heart fell on the floor.
I am but a loving golliwog you've
hidden in that space.
My love will reach its goals whether
in fire snow or hail, for his cabbage patch
doll will never be replace.

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I like how you go outside the typical thinking zones, how you create and work on new images and work them into your story lines, like cabbage patch dolls? that has to be the first ive ever heard that said in a poem lol
    thats a really neat poem

  • 16 years ago

    by malina

    I love how you used your words...thanks for commenting on my poems...without them i don't think i would be back here again...

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I AGREE WITH EVERYONE ABOVE AND
    THE END SUPPRISE ME 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I AGREE WITH EVERYONE ABOVE AND
    THE END SUPPRISE ME 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is interesting. Your imagery and flow is immensely strong and unique! 5/5

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