Awe thats amazing. i really like this poem lol. this actually carries meaning for me. keep up the incresdible writting you have some major talent.

What a dark beautiful poem, very well written

This is interesting. Your imagery and flow is immensely strong and unique! 5/5

I AGREE WITH EVERYONE ABOVE AND
THE END SUPPRISE ME 5/5

I AGREE WITH EVERYONE ABOVE AND
THE END SUPPRISE ME 5/5

I love how you used your words...thanks for commenting on my poems...without them i don't think i would be back here again...

I like how you go outside the typical thinking zones, how you create and work on new images and work them into your story lines, like cabbage patch dolls? that has to be the first ive ever heard that said in a poem lol
thats a really neat poem