Real good poem! loved the theme in it.. try and perhaps work a bit on the spelling mistakes it'll highten the experience 4 / 5 :D
regards Arun

I'm glad that you changed your mind (or were you found in time).
Once (upon a time (sorry, I'm lacking sleep)) I thought about comitting suicide aswell, but I thought "Hell no!!! I'm not gonna give them that satisfaction, of getting rid of me that easily! If they want me to die, they'll have to kill me themself!!!!!"

I can feel your emotions and relate to them. 5/5