by John Nov 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Laying down and watch Cherry blossoms |
by BlueJay
Wow!!! The imagery in this piece is superb. The word choice is strong as is the emotion. Speaking if emotion I think you have nailed that in this piece, it oozes out of the piece. There is a beautiful story in this amazing piece. The flow is a little rough but its still easy flow. I love this piece, you have penned a perfect piece. Excellent job, 5/5 from me |
by Nobodys Hero
Great job this is a lovely poem |