Comments : When we're together

  • 17 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Wow you've really outdone yourself this time, that was just so so beautiful.... i absolutly adore it keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Aww this is adoreable,
    i believe ive been talking to your gf
    shes really nice,
    lucky guy =]
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jesyka Vendetta

    Wow that was beautiful! tu est tres fantastique!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe :D

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Lovely write.

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    Aweehh...this is really cute...I know exactly how you're feeling. I love it!...<3 =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Paige Lea

    I love this poem

    it has so much emotion
    it's absolutely amazing

    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Really cute poem! i liked this part

    We can tell each other everything,
    Without being embarassed
    I bet you know more things about me then I do,
    I can't explain how I feel when I'm with you

    I can relate :P Well written, keep it up, 5/5.
    P.S. I'd love it if you'd r/r/c on my new poems. thanks alot
    Rachel

  • 16 years ago

    by DaytimeStar

    Your vary sweet and funny
    LINE:flip my frown
    Right upside down

    lol vary nicley done lol

    -star
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jesyka Vendetta

    Awwwwww greatness =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Adorable!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Your writing is beautiful
    i love it !
    your an artist with your words
    and when i read your poems they pait me a picture...♥

    brittany:]

  • 16 years ago

    by DoodlingDaydreamer

    OMG I never thought guys had feelings!!JK It was really beautiful...

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Awwww... this made my heart melt...she is so lucky:)