Really nice poem hope you make another one
i vote it 5/5

Hi there, i reallt like your poem, i agree to you that love sometimes is a tragic and make you fool but hope you will you true love
I vote it 5/5

The rhyming was off for me. If your poems are going to rhyme then you need to have a proper rhyme scheme. A simple example would be ABAB (if you don't already know). Also I would say to make your stanzas all have the same amount of lines, either 4 or 5 or something like that. It just makes the poem look cleaner and it's easier to read.

As for the rest of the poem, I thought it was really good. The whole message of the poem is something I'm sure a lot of people can relate to or at least understand.

My favorite stanza is:

"Maybe the time isn't right,
But I'm willing to fight,
Forgive me, I just coudn't
believe the beauty that stands out,
Your presence alone
erases all my doubts,
You're just someone
I can't live without..."

It just shows the amount of emotion you feel towards whoever you wrote this about. All in all it's a pretty strong poem but it just needs some formatting work and that's really it. Good job.