Awwww i absolutely loved this poem! its on my favorites list! lol..it was sooo deep and sooo honest and soo like amazing..i loved how u talked about real things that happen like for example, the bus stop, i loved it from beginning to end..great job! 5/5 take care

I love this thats exactly how I feel about someone.

Really good poem.
not to short and not to long.
It really captures the emotions well.
I feel really bad about what i did to my first girlfriend now, and i know especially after reading something like this, that i'd never do anything like that again.

Wow, i can really relate 2 this! beautiful flow and choice of wording. 5/5
xoxo
~me~

Wow that was simple but i got the message. i liked it, 5/5

Shhort, sweet but so full of meaning, and thought. i loved it. amazing,

--aprils conspiracy

Again, I have read a lot of poems hat are similar to this one, but this one is short and to the point! You have a good way with words and an amazing talent, keep writing!