This a very good poem haii, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep them coming babe!!!

Beautiful absolutely beautiful

This poem is the best in the three I read so far. The rhymes are more shown here. The flow goes nicely and the choosing of words is warm and simple. Nice work 4/5

Hmm .. interesting piece. I have to be honest ... the flow was shaky and there were parts that words did not fit.

"If only I had known
That that would be the start"

^I do no think the repitition of the word "that" helps the poem at all. I understand it fits in and makes sense, but it throws off the flow and is not effective.

Overall, it was fresh read and the storyline was new and interesting. Good job. *4/5*

If only we could know in an instant if the one we love is our true love. I loved this one. 6/5

Aww, this is so beautiful *tear*!!! It showed so much emotion and I can tell you're in love. Great poem. 5/5

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