Flesh for Flesh

by Nightmare Fiend   Nov 2, 2007


Like shiny stars, red eyes,
glowing in darkness of the night,
gliding through the pitch black skies,
beasts prepare for the survival fight,
soon it's time, soon someone dies...

Unborn child, innocent flesh,
straight from womb of mommy,
meat, oh so sweet, so fresh,
to feed little beast tummy...

Is there any better purpose for a man,
to be stock of warm meat,
higher purpose for arrogant human,
to be melting in belly heat,
food for demons, that's fate of man...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Again an interesting write for me, it was okay, could've been better, but overall it was good. Nice write,keep it up.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    Amazing poem would u mind reading mine pleaze just pick one i dont care which one LOL

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    This was a truly splendid dark poem. Right from the very first line you can tell it's going to be out of this world (quite litterally)

    It's very obvious from the types of poems you write that you have a beautifully twisted mind and a very vivid imagination. This is not an insult, on the contrary - it's a very good thing.
    You're able to take a fictional being and bring it to life so much that by the time the reader has finished with your poem, they believe in it themselves.

    This poem has extremely clear and vivid imagery in it, so much so that if the reader was to close their eyes - I guarantee they would be able to visualise these creatures exactly as you have made them.

    The only slight mistake I can see (and it is a miniscule one) is this ...
    "to feed little beast tummy..."
    Needs to be
    "to feed little beasts tummy..."

    A truly entertaining and imaginative poem, filled with horror and gore.

    [5/5]

    ~Pete.

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