I liked this. haikus arent really up my alley, too short. but this was quite intriging. 4.5

Beautiful Haiku.. it expresses your ( ? )feelings/emotions. And I just love that in poems/quotes/haiku's.. whatever =P So, good job!
5/5

I still love these short poems, the way
you expresse them in such a beautiful way,
it was awesome, nicely written piece.
5/5

This is a Senryu. Which is Haiku, but written on emotion. A Haiku is written about nature, with this form. I love both. And you did this one well. With such short poems though, word choice is vital, so stronger words are better. However, you didn't do such a bad job. The last line added a nice touch. Well done.

Tammie

I have only tried this style once, and failed miserably.

Yet here, you have masted it beautifully and manage to make it look so effortless and easy.

You managed to pack in so much depth and emotion in a relatively short form, and that isn't always easy to do.

You did a wonderful job with this piece.