by mier Nov 2, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Sordid karma for her blasphemy, |
by Nix
Wow, honestly this piece takes breath away. It is just so good, I absolutely love everything about the way you wrote it, word choice is also so powerful and atmosphere that you created amaze me, very deep and truly dark. Ending line is also so effective, and you did superb job with rhyming in this piece, personally, I don't know to write poems with rhyming but you did that amazingly, once again. Well done, I so enjoyed reading this poem. |
Wow, wow... So breathtaking... |