Wow, wow... So breathtaking...
Every stanza is excellently written. You impressed me with imagery that you created through this amazing poem. Whole piece is so unique, with superb wording, and greatly created dark atmosphere.
I love your writing style, I'm going to add you to my favorites list.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me

Wow, honestly this piece takes breath away. It is just so good, I absolutely love everything about the way you wrote it, word choice is also so powerful and atmosphere that you created amaze me, very deep and truly dark. Ending line is also so effective, and you did superb job with rhyming in this piece, personally, I don't know to write poems with rhyming but you did that amazingly, once again. Well done, I so enjoyed reading this poem.