Thank you for writing, beautiful!

~* Natasha *~

Ah, a spin on the old Our Father. Very well done, with a pun intended, yet you didn't make it stupid. Great job

Greta, xx

P.S thankyou for the comment on my poem =]

That was really good, hun. Keep up the good work.

I really really like this alot!
its amazing and so filled with emotions!
Great job!
keep it up!
im def adding you to my fave authors. :)

<3
XxAshleyxX

Nicely done. I loved it <3

~Victoria~