Missing you

by Abu3li   Nov 2, 2007


The smile lost its way to my face,
My breaths are in a fast race

I can't hold back my tears,
Losing you is the worst of my fears.

Don't you ever say it's only twenty days,
Baby, that's killing me in all ways

My life won't be the same,
If I don't hear you say my name.

I'm gonna miss the goodnights
I'm gonna miss the fights

Mostly, I'm gonna miss your laugh
Dear, I'm gonna miss your love.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is Beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful poem as usual from you

  • 16 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Awww, This is the one that caught my attention. Its so beautiful. You must have been really in love. Great Job

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "My breaths are in a fast race"
    ^^ I'm not too fond of that line, "are in a" should be changed to something else, i think. :|

    "I'm gonna miss the fights"
    ^^ And, I'm gonna miss these fights. ?

    Overall you did a wonderful job, a few tweaks here and there.
    But, it had great emotion, rhythm, and meaning darling. (:
    Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really good poem. i know that feeling, wen you dont want the person to go and just at the thought of them going you miss them. anyway, an amazing poem. 5/5

    Kalee

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