Beautiful

I loved it sooooo! much! u did a fantastic job! thnx 4 the comment!

AWE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that last line well... AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! so cute!

Soo0ooooo........sweet!

I can relate very much!!! i was in this situation for a long time, yes i am only 14 but that doesn't mean i can't get hurt. I really loved this poem its short but still you let every emotion come out and explain its story great job!! 5/5

laura

Beautiful! I can relate. Great Job

Its so beautiful i love it

Pretty good..i can feel the sincerity of this poem,, its great and fabulous

This is a really good poem. i know that feeling, wen you dont want the person to go and just at the thought of them going you miss them. anyway, an amazing poem. 5/5

Kalee

"My breaths are in a fast race"
^^ I'm not too fond of that line, "are in a" should be changed to something else, i think. :|

"I'm gonna miss the fights"
^^ And, I'm gonna miss these fights. ?

Overall you did a wonderful job, a few tweaks here and there.
But, it had great emotion, rhythm, and meaning darling. (:
Keep it up.

Awww, This is the one that caught my attention. Its so beautiful. You must have been really in love. Great Job

Wonderful poem as usual from you

This is Beautiful