I like it =] Nice how you describe every word you say at the beginning of each stanza =] Of course I think that is what you meant to do xD But I actually quite like that style of writing =) anywaaaaaaaaaay... 5/5!
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SO brightlY writteN.....

Wow very nicely written Hebe, 5/5 love your work keep it up:

Hehe nice ending

It was a short poem but it's still great, I think it flowed well, good job.

I like this stanza.
Whisperings,
Voices everywhere,
A scary feeling,
Exclude,
Hoarse voices around you

Keep it up