Love It!
can kinda relate 2 it, great wording.
5/5 keep up the great work =]
xx love

5/5 and i rated it to...lol
this poem made me add you to my favorite author, lucky u your the 2nd person on there :)
you use such great words that make a person feel like they're u i (i can relate to every word)

5/5 and i rated it to...lol
this poem made me add you to my favorite author, lucky u your the 2nd person on there :)
you use such great words that make a person feel like they're u i (i can relate to every word)

5/5 and i rated it to...lol
this poem made me add you to my favorite author, lucky u your the 2nd person on there :)
you use such great words that make a person feel like they're u i (i can relate to every word)

I love this poem because i can relate completely... i have noone i can trust to keep my fears and secrets, noone to hold on to while i cry... this is the perfect poem for those of who really feel alone.

great poem. :)

Amazing poem, you have questins in there that a lot off people in this site ask regular but you make it more effective. i normally hate poems like this- the form the questions, rhyming couplets. But this really works for you its captivating and its really good..an dthe grammar iun this is bvetter.

i love the title too, its what made me read it, i ask myself that questin everyday, why do i push my boyfriend of over two years away, when i no that he'd be there no matter if he doesn't stand..i still do it.. its a defense mechanism glad i'm not the only one though.

i guess you were angry at a friend when you wrote this poem and this is why you put the word decent into capital right, you need to bring it back down, its kinda not professional looking.

anyway another fabulous poem. xxxxx

Man i relate to this:(
good poem babee

A lovely write. deep and pure. you poured your heart out. a poem i can deff relate too. keep writing! 5/5.

-Ashlei.