Ana, I Wont Let You Win

by Jenni Marie   Nov 2, 2007


Darling, you're not going to win
No longer will I play your games
Never did I do anything to deserve
All your hatred, torment and pain

Used to think you were a friend
Only now I know that isn't the case
You pretended you were helping me
I was suffocating in your embrace

Trying your hardest to destroy me
Making me hate my entire life
Once so happy and contented
Until you plunged me into strife

But I finally saw the realties
Of all your twisted, hateful ways
Now it's time to finally fight back
No longer will I live in such a daze

So while you might still be here
Trying to slowly kill me inside
I'm waking up to your deceitful ways
Know now that you constantly lied

And I'm going to keep fighting
I'm going to take back what's mine
I'm not going to let you win this time
Eventually, once again I'll be fine

I don't need you in my life anymore
Finally going to show that I'm stronger
So you keep trying to tear me right apart
But Ana, you wont control me any longer

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I really liked the determination to not lose in this piece.

    Lots of emotion.. really good flow and rhyme too.

    5/5 :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    What i liked:
    I like the over all message
    (i know i say that alot)

    What i didn't like:
    the way your poem lost it's self in the end

    "Comments:
    the lenght is perfect fo the point you want to get acrossed

    Improvement:
    you might want to add some puncation to your poem to help the flow

    thank you for the read
    keep it up
    :~)Sam Mayo

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Well its about damn time you ditched her.... I'm proud of you my sweet dizzy teacup, chin up my dear all will be well and always remember these words: "You ARE beautiful"

    I hope that many others read your Ana series because you've sent out a very powerful message......

    Big hugs and lots of love to ya!

  • 17 years ago

    by MeeyCie

    Really good poem of you. I really liked it . good work

    [5/5]

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