Really good poem of you. I really liked it . good work

[5/5]

Well its about damn time you ditched her.... I'm proud of you my sweet dizzy teacup, chin up my dear all will be well and always remember these words: "You ARE beautiful"

I hope that many others read your Ana series because you've sent out a very powerful message......

Big hugs and lots of love to ya!

What i liked:
I like the over all message
(i know i say that alot)

What i didn't like:
the way your poem lost it's self in the end

"Comments:
the lenght is perfect fo the point you want to get acrossed

Improvement:
you might want to add some puncation to your poem to help the flow

thank you for the read
keep it up
:~)Sam Mayo

I really liked the determination to not lose in this piece.

Lots of emotion.. really good flow and rhyme too.

5/5 :D