Comments : Longing

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This poem has depth in abstract words that no person except the writer could understand fully. This is beautifully misterious. your style is out of my depth for i dont tend to write without rhyme or flow. this let me down slightly but soemtimes its more wise to not rhyme for it can turn cliche' and pathetic.

    deep deep deep.

    you're welcomed to this site with open arms. keep writing your little heart out.