BEAUTIFUL POEM! I relate. well done =]

Its is veryy good but i think the 4th part sayin fear should be left out it would sound better but all in all i like it [x

Well, I surely love this poem. I wasn't too fond of how you had 3 stanzas, then 4 through-out (minus the last - but I usually count that as an exception). But, it did go just fine with the rest of the poem.

And, I love how you put it. I've always wanted to write a poem like such, and it's great to read one that is so easy to relate to. because, so many people go through life with in such a way.

You did a wonderful job with this.
And, at first I wasn't sure why it was in the sad poems, lol. But, at the end I got it.

This is really good :]
i liked it
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great job

5/5