Illusion

by Sinful Want   Nov 2, 2007


I feel the separation between me and body
The tearing sickness pulling me apart
I stand in one place, but I'm not really there
I'm lost in my mind
Lost in the darkness of my shadow
Soon the illusion will take control
Stealing my shadow that I'm lost in...

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  • 16 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    This is my fave of yours all of them are so veryy good! keep up with all the hard work it shows 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    Powerful it was verypowerful for being short and i really liked how you just flowed with it! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This was pretty powerful for a such a short poem. a lot of dark poems are longer, painting the picture. but i liked this. i like the word usage and the flow. it all ties together pretty well. it could've been a bit stronger in some places, but other than that, good job. ^.^

    <3 Gabby

  • 16 years ago

    by fallenforever

    Great poem

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