Great poem

This was pretty powerful for a such a short poem. a lot of dark poems are longer, painting the picture. but i liked this. i like the word usage and the flow. it all ties together pretty well. it could've been a bit stronger in some places, but other than that, good job. ^.^

<3 Gabby

Powerful it was verypowerful for being short and i really liked how you just flowed with it! 5/5!

This is my fave of yours all of them are so veryy good! keep up with all the hard work it shows 5/5