This is a bit weird, but I liked it. 5/5

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You know I thought I'd drop in, see another piece of trite teenage hard drive filler, give them some advice on flow and structure and BAM! I got smacked in the head by a real poem.

I say this with one hundred percent sincerity; THANK YOU.

Bret

Hmmm. something to think about. keep writing kiddo. very abstract very complicatedly smple which doesnt make sense.

>.<
5.5

Very creative, it's just blews mind away, because I'm really thinking what are you trying to say with this piece. But amazing thought you put in there.
5/5 Keep writing!

Great poem its very creative it gives people something to think about as well i loved it amazing write :)

--emz--

A very interesting piece. The choosing of words here is unique. The whole subject is different. I like it, but it could be longer 4/5

A really unique piece of writing. Even the topic is quite different from the norm, The flow was good and the simplicity of the poem just added more effect. 5/5

Wow... this is excellently written...
really... the word flow and the concept...everything great..
I really liked it..

ANother wow..Simply words and simply written yet complicate my mind..That was excellent...Very unique and brilliant imagery from you...Good job..