Comments : Silent Plea

  • 16 years ago

    by Behind Blue Eyes

    Yet again, this makes me think of my latest experience... these are the words i couldnt think of!

    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by ChAsInG PavEmEnTs

    WhOo!! I LOVE THIS POEM U SAID THINGS THAT I FELL BUT NEVER COULD GET THE WORDS OUT OR EVEN DWN ON PAPER 4 THAT MATTER
    "Does my pain bring you happiness?
    Does it make you feel big?"
    i wonder these questions everytime i look into my "crushes" eyes
    good work5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LilMissLN

    I LOVE IT
    I LOVE IT
    I LOVE IT
    I can SSOO RELATE

    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarahh

    I love this poem becaue every word is what im going through right now... i hate him but i love him so much.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by thegirltheydontsee

    I like you poemm, go back and fix it

  • 16 years ago

    by sarah

    Thats really sad.
    sounds like something id write.
    you did good.

  • I like it. it's great. you have real talent

    tohavesomeoneloveyou

  • 16 years ago

    by briana

    Love it i can realate so much
    check out the few poems i have

  • 16 years ago

    by WhatxYouxSaid

    Thats a really deep poem. full of emotion. good job and keep it up.